Comment: I had this title in the pile for ten years. It's one of those things, time goes by, others things get in the way... but I've finally added it to my monthly lists. After all this time, I liked it but it wasn't as amazing as I imagined.
I decided to add this title to the pile after seeing some positive recommendations by readers with similar tastes. I was curious to see what the author would do with world building and, of course, how the romance would be developed. In terms of imagination, I think the author did a great job creating and developing things, but I cannot say I was completely immersed in this world.
The story is compelling enough because we basically have two people who bond after an impactful situation. After this, they are able to talk to one another and we can see how they slowly start to like each other. I thought the story would be focused on the romance, which happened to be set on a space ship, and that led me to believe the sci fi aspects would be concentrated to this. It turns out, it wasn't so and after the rescue, Turk needs to inform the people he had an agreement with about his rescue. This is why they went to meet the person who ends up being a villain.
I think that, deep down, the plot isn't too complicated and the events happen more quickly after this. I will say that I felt some detachment from what was happening, not because it was too out there, but because it seemed as if the tell, not show was an obvious tool just to move things forward but in a way that would allow the reader to understand why things were going from one situation to another. It's not that I think this is a bad tactic, but it made things rushed and I kept thinking that perhaps instead of having these scenes if we had skipped immediately to the important parts, only knowing about the facts would be enough. I know, I know, practically the opposite of what usually works, but that was my impression.
Once they escape from the bad guys happens, Isaac needs medical help and Turk believes his people can help. Then the plot moves to Turk's planet and this is where the author's imagination shined, for there is a lot to accept in how things work for Turk's people. I think this element was interesting and made me want to see what would be next for them and what would happen after they try to help Isaac. This was my favorite part of the novel, not only for the world building but because it helped the guys establish their relationship, as well as letting us see them interacting with others. I always like this because often the dynamics with others is a huge help to grasp characters' personalities.
The romance, I have to say, was not that great. I mean, I liked they found each other and all that, but the supposed chemistry they felt wasn't that obvious to me. I think they were too cutesy cute to one another, certainly understanding and after they decide to be a couple, everything is cozy between them, but I think I missed the "thrill" of the rush of emotions when two people meet and fall in love. I just don't think their relationship was as "predestined" as we are supposed to believe.
Obviously, there is more conflict to go through before the happy ending, we learn more about how Turk's people came to live there and how society works, and all this is fine, but by this point I was no longer as fascinated. Again, I didn't dislike the story, but I don't think it was always able to captivate my interest. I think the author could have found a way to explain a few things better too, so that when characters mentioned this or that or when they had to decide something, part of what happens wouldn't feel as dissociated as it was.
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