For twenty-one-year-old Isaac, Pelican Bay is only supposed to be a stopping point on the trek from San Francisco to New York. With his little brother, Newt, in tow, Isaac is just looking to make things right by returning something of value to a person he wronged. But "getting lost" in the next big city proves to be a problem when the brutal Minnesota winter claims Isaac's car and strands him and Newt at the animal sanctuary. When the owners of the place offer him a job, a desperate Isaac agrees, despite the presence of a man Isaac instinctively knows could be his downfall...
Nothing about Isaac makes sense to Maddox. Not his piercings or makeup or flashy clothes. And most certainly not the snarky mouth that doesn't match the vulnerability Maddox sees in the younger man's eyes. But one thing does make sense to the hardened former soldier. Isaac is running from something, and Maddox's gut is telling him not to let Isaac and little Newt go until he can ferret out the truth.
But having Isaac around means trying to make sense of something else Maddox isn't expecting... his own body's response to the beautiful younger man. Aside from their explosive chemistry, nothing about the straitlaced soldier and the secretive misfit works.
But maybe that's exactly why it does...
Comment: This is the second installment in the Pelican Bay series, whose first book I had read last year. I liked that one enough to want to try the next but I've found some of the issues I liked less to be repeated here, which leads me to conclude it's simply the writer's style.
Having read the first book and now this one, what comes to mind is the fact there is a slight taste of cheesiness in the author's style. This doesn't mean the stories are only fluff or silliness, no, but I would have liked certain things to happen in a less sugary way. I'm specifically thinking about the romance, which feels too simple, just like the other one was. Perhaps I could even dare to say that the dynamics between Mad and Isaac didn't always seem convincing they were a m/m couple...or perhaps it's just me.
This is to say that the romance does have some development that feels too easy or too cheesy.... in certain moments a different writing style or scene choices might have enhanced the relationship in a better way. I liked that they found each other, of course, as I did that they trusted each other from a certain point on, but this development wasn't as smooth or as "organic" as it could.
Mad wasn't the best of characters in the first book but we learned why and he does change, which means we can root for him now. Although, to be fair, he never felt as approachable as Isaac. Still, I could accept some of his behavior due to his experiences at war and the PTSD consequences and all that. I also think he was made to seem more aloof, less easy to read on purpose, to perhaps better contrast with Isaac, who is a much more sensible and vulnerable character.
In fact, Isaac sometimes reads as being a bit too vulnerable, too open about his state of mind. With this I mean his personality because he only shares his fears and reasons to run with his brother closer to the end of the story. Nevertheless, he does seem less assured of himself for believable reasons, but the dynamics with Mad felt a little frustrating to me. I will also confess there was a specific element to their relationship I think was pointless. Everything put together made for a couple who didn't always win me over as such.
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