Jack and Sebastian are on the move once more. This time, to the frozen mountains of Askophai in search of a kingdom’s missing artifact. The journey alone would be perilous enough, but how are they supposed to find something that no one can describe? And what does the mysterious man who can make himself invisible have to do with any of it?
Jack has enough of Sebastian’s secrets to deal with, without taking on a whole kingdom’s. He and Sebastian might be together, but Jack still has his doubts about their long-term future. Assuming they have one that is, given Sebastian’s penchant for walking them headlong into danger at every opportunity.
One thing’s for certain, they’re going to need an awful lot of luck to succeed in this mission and return home safely.
Comment: This is the second installment in the 13 Kingdoms trilogy by author HL Day. Last year I've read the first book and found it average, but the opportunity to read the other books happened and now I've read the second, which ended up giving me the same sensations as the first. Clearly, this is a matter of style and while this author's is competent enough, it doesn't dazzle me.
In this second adventure, protagonists Sebastian and Jack are officially a couple and have been lazing around at Jack's farm when the request to help search for an artifact reaches them. Thinking of the financial compensation and the possibilityof discovering clues about Jack's sister convince them to accept. As before, they see themselves in all kinds of trouble but their wit and experience certainly makes for the most challenging tasks. Will they find the artifact on time?
Right before starting writing this text, I've quickly took a look at the last paragraph of the comment I wrote on the first book and I'll have to say, my thoughts remain precisely the same: this was fun and quirky but I still felt the author could have added more balance to the main characters' relationship. This second story is, of course, a bridge, between the presentation of the characters and their personalities in the first book and the rather obvious path it leads to, which will be concluded in the third.
This is to say that while this second story has all the elements one would expect, the character development didn't seem to be that obvious. Certainly, there are situations which kind of help settling the characters' feelings but it is a given from the start that Sebastian is hiding something - to me that is obvious too - and this means he is not being fully honest with Jack. Considering how this book ends and what the blurb of the next one includes, that will likely be the main subject of the last book.
To me, this means that while the characterization is consistent and we do get to know a little more about them by their intereactions and inner thoughts (the narrative is in first person, alternated by each of them), it still feels a bit forced. I also hoped that in this second book the balance between the dramatic situations and the overall quirky and light tone of the story would have been improved, but no. The author's style remains the same and while this can be seen as a good thing, it also means that to me it's as if something is missing, and there was potential for the story to be stronger, emotionally speaking.
The plot is really simple and, to be honest, I don't feel is necessary to say much about it because nothing really was gained nor elevated by what happened. Sebastian and Jack have another adventure and while trying to reach their goal, they face several situations, often amusing or silly. There is only one episode which was a bit more serious and even that one was dealt with a lot less intensity than I anticipated... again, it's not that is a bad thing, nor that it would have to be different, but the way I see things, if certain elements are there, such as the difference in their personalities and the difficulty to really trust each other's feelings, a bit more seriousness would have been valuable.