Every year, each village is required to send a young woman to the Empire's capital - her fate: to be burned alive for the entertainment of the masses. For the last five years, one small village's tithe has been the same woman. Gilene's sacrifice protects all the other young women of her village, and her secret to staying alive lies with the magic only she possesses.
But this year is different.
Azarion, the Empire's most famous gladiator, has somehow seen through her illusion, and is set on blackmailing Gilene into using her abilities to help him escape his life of slavery. And unknown to Gilene, he also wants to reclaim the birthright of his clan.
To protect her family and village, she will risk everything to return to the Empire and burn once more.
Gilene is a sort of fire witch, in the sense that she isn't burned in contact with fire, which comes in handy in her village, since all villages in the empire have to "offer" a woman for the Rites of Spring, the end of a special event demanded by the emperors when the women are burned at a pire. Gilene has done this many times already and she does it because she knows she is immune, saving many other women who aren't. However, this time, something doesn't happens as always, because Azarion, the most successful gladiator, who is also a slave like everyone trapped by the empire, sees through her illusion and blackmails her into helping him escape. She reluctantly agrees, thinking this would be the end of it... the thing is, once she is outside, already ready to be taken away by her brothers, Azarion kind of kidnaps her. He claims he needs her help again, to regain his status in his hometown. But how can she trust him again?
This author has the best ideas for her books, even if based in other stories or situations. I'm always eager to see how the plots develop in her fantasy settings and this time, the beginning was as captivating as I imagined, with both Gilene and Azarion teaming up to escape. Of course, I knew they could not separate right away, because this is clearly a romance too, but I will say that after they escape, things aren't as thrilling as I wanted.
The empire is ruled by evil people, who enslave others and promote entertainment in humiliating ways. We are immediately taken by the characters' need to escape and to do something about this, but the road until the final battle (of course there would be one) wasn't as smooth as I hoped for. I mean, expectations are always hard to meet, but I've read other books by the author and some did accomplish this goal nicely, so I know the author could do it.
The details about the characters, the settings, the world building are all interesting and easy to visualize. I see that the author had obvious inspiration on Roman culture, as well as other subjects, but this all seemed to mesh well. I'd say that my issue with the novel was mainly the romance and the development of the plot around that. Azarion and Gilene as likable characters on their own (despite their actions in some moments) and I did root for them, and wanted to see them succeed, and for Gilene to escape and for Azarion to gain his freedom. Once they were running together, though, things weren't as interesting.
They aren't immediate allies, after all he didn't tell her he would need more of her help, but time on the road and then in his hometown work to being them closer. This plot move made sense within the story we were given but.... the pace sometimes was a bit too quick for the amount of issues they both went through in their lives. I get it that the point was not to offer a huge story but there are plot transitions that could have helped this and I think that didn't happen, so the progression of things between them felt rushed.
Perhaps the thing is, both Azarion and Gilene weren't given enough layers, to match the traumas and the situations they faced. In particular Azarion, who was a slave and how all this affected him. The author does offer some context for how they are still mentally sane (my interpretation) but I just didn't buy it completely, if one takes into consideration how they suffered. In a way, this element was kind of superficial and made the reading experience less impactful, emotionally.
The romance was also too bland, because we don't get to see how it happens. We don't have enough scenes with them thinking about one another, with them interacting in a gradual way for the final acceptance of their feelings to seem inevitable. It just was, and with the fact of their personalities being superficially presented too, it wasn't as romantic nor amazing as I wanted, and as had happened in other books by the author.











