Lord Jasen of Grumhul
has a gambling problem. Or rather, his father has the problem, but since
he's gambled away everything that was rightfully Jasen's, it's become
his problem, too. With no money and no skills to earn a living, his best
bet for getting away from his father is to present himself for marriage
at Court in the Draelands, the kingdom at the center of the Allied
Realms. Jasen's courtly manners aren't the most refined (to say the
least), but he hopes he's still capable of attracting at least a minor
lord.
He isn't looking to cause a scandal, but that's exactly what happens when he immediately attracts the attention of both a powerful dragon and King Rilvor himself. The King serves as the mystical link between the magic of the dragons and humankind; since the death of his wife two years before, magic in the Allied Realms has suffered. He must take a spouse this year, and the fight for his favor has gotten downright vicious.
No one, including Jasen himself, thinks he's a proper match for the king. But the growing affection between them can't be denied. Jasen loves Rilvor, but he's petrified about becoming lord consort to a king. Unfortunately, the two can't be separated, and Jasen must decide if true love is worth all the trouble.
He isn't looking to cause a scandal, but that's exactly what happens when he immediately attracts the attention of both a powerful dragon and King Rilvor himself. The King serves as the mystical link between the magic of the dragons and humankind; since the death of his wife two years before, magic in the Allied Realms has suffered. He must take a spouse this year, and the fight for his favor has gotten downright vicious.
No one, including Jasen himself, thinks he's a proper match for the king. But the growing affection between them can't be denied. Jasen loves Rilvor, but he's petrified about becoming lord consort to a king. Unfortunately, the two can't be separated, and Jasen must decide if true love is worth all the trouble.
Comment: I
got this book after a recommendation by someone whose taste in books is
somewhat similar to mine. I only knew this was paranormal and had a romance so
I started reading without much awareness of what it would entail.
In this -
not very long – story we meet Jasen, a young nobleman whose father has
squandered the family’s wealth and that means he needs to travel to Court,
where the event of finding spouses happens. This event is usual in the society
and works for both sides: debutantes or young members who need to marry and the
prospective partners they need to dazzle so they can be chosen.
This year, the
widowed King will also choose a partner for his magical abilities (that help to
sustain control on the land itself) need to be shared and whomever the King
picks needs to be the right person.
Jasen isn’t
dragon touched, meaning, he doesn’t show any magical ability, and he would
never be chosen but things seems to
change when he arrives at the palace and in his first day he is summoned as if
in a trance to one of the dragons in residence. Jasen’s status becomes new but
will he find happiness as easily as jealousy in Court?
This was
mostly a sweet story but I did expect a bit more development or world building.
I see the author has added to this story in another edition, longer and
expanded and I can assume some of the things I wish could have been done here
(mostly character development) were addressed there.
This
version was written as part of the Goodreads M/M group challenge… I am not
aware of the rules but perhaps page length was an issue.
Jasen is
the main character and he does seem to be a likable character although I admit
I wasn’t as impressed with his behavior at home, meaning that he had different
partners – ok, without anything being serious and no one feeling bad about it –
but his promiscuity, even if not hurting anyone, felt highlighted in a negative
way. This also played a small part in how his relationship with the King
progressed but it wasn’t a subject here; I suppose it might have been in the
newer version.
Well, it’s
not such a surprise Jasen and the King would meet and feel content in each
other’s company, is there? I think this element was predictable and the slight
patronizing the King has towards Jasen, the way Jasen is presented and
described makes me think of him as a somewhat spoiled boy who had to learn
otherwise because of his father’s behavior. Now he is portrayed as an
adventurous young man when he is in the company of some characters but as an innocent
and too much a special someone while with the King.
The dichotomy felt too
obvious and it ruined the romance a little for me. I mean, there was no
surprise in how the two of them would end up bonding… the romance was very
plain and easy.
The King was
too much of an enigma. We only have Jasen’s POV so the King doesn’t seem as
fleshed out and their scenes together feel a little too simple, not as complex
as they could. In fact, as a whole, the story was a bit under done. I, again,
can imagine some of these things being developed in the larger version but here
the feeling I get is that was possible to present in a simplistic way, was it.
For
whatever purpose this story was created – the author explains her inspiration
was a reader’s letter and an image of dragons – I think the end result in this
version was purely objective. Some details are interesting to know about; I
liked the dragons and the little paranormal elements. It was also easy to
imagine some landscapes and scenes from the descriptions. However, the overall
effect was too predictable, including the villain’s actions close to the end,
so I was not amazed as I expected.
It was
still a good enough read; don’t be mistaken, but not great.
Grade: 6/10
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