Shane’s career in the majors never quite took off. Wanting to quit on his own terms, Shane agrees to a one-year contract with the Ravens and finds himself playing for a coach who thinks he’s an aging goon, and with a team that doesn’t trust him, Troy, or each other. Despite his determination not to get involved, Shane unwillingly becomes part of the team… and is just as unwillingly drawn to the gruff, out-and-proud coach. As the Ravens struggle to build a new identity, Shane and Troy succumb to the passion that might cost them everything.
Comment: This is the fifth and final installment in the Scoring Chances series by author Avon Gale, which I have been reading lately. It isn't my favorite (I'm debating if that is the 1st or the 3rd) but I think the series finished strong enough.
As always, the "voice" of these books was very appealing to me. Somehow, the way the author writes these books has been an important part of why I keep wanting to read them and here, even though the dynamics between coach/player weren't always to my taste, the author still managed to give the impression this was an emotional inevitability and convinced me of the couple's intentions and feelings.
The plot isn't too complicated, we follow these two and the rest of team as they go from game to game and how their personal lives are affected by those events and what they think of one another. Closer to the end there's a situation which felt a little predictable and I think the author only wanted to use it to create a comparison, which works. As for if it really was necessary, though... I might have preferred a different option.
The romance is obviously the intention here but I kind of liked how often they talked about their careers and how some decisions were made based on that. In this regard, I preferred Shane's character, he is at the end of his career and is wondering if he will do another year as soon as he feels he is part of the team and his feelings for Troy intensify. He believes he might have another good year, especially since we learn many had expectations for his talent and he never played in the major league. Of course, plot stuff happens and he is a little forced to make a decision sooner than later.
The relationship between Troy and Shane should not happen, clearly, for they are in an unfair position, and as expected, something has to be done about it, also because them being together would certainly affect the team. Often we accept stuff in romance or fiction which in real life is a legal nightmare, but I'm simply glad the author didn't keep the situation without any type of resolution on the page. I think them being a couple lasted way longer than it should, though.
I like what you say about the author's voice being the thing that keeps us reading, even when some aspects of the story are less than satisfactory or less enjoyable for us. Also, on the player/coach relationship (or others where there's a heavy imbalance of power between the parties, sometimes with legal repercussions) and how they're treated in romance, I find that I'm a lot less forgiving, but especially with recently-written stories. It's one thing when a book with this trope was written twenty years ago or more; it's quite different when it was written last year/this year.
ReplyDeleteI think the thing here is that we are shown how they are falling in love and how their personalities don't really clash and neither uses their "position" unfairly. But knowing this and being aware this a romance novel should not be an excuse. I did like it that once the issue was brought to light, it didn't last, the author found a way to solve it on the page, so there would be no loose points. But they were together longer than they should before that happened, yes.
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