Comment: It's July already and time for another TBR Challenge post. The theme for this month is "freedom!" and what came to mind right away was a story with someone gaining freedom, therefore when I realized that this book had a heroine who had just gotten out of prison.... ta-da!
In this book we meet heroine Delpha Wade, who has been in prison for 14 years for manslaughter. Delpha killed a man who had raped her and she just barely missed killing the other one, who had been the father of her rapist. Delpha paid her dues and now is out and she only wants to have quiet life and for that she needs to have a job which, she is aware, will not be easy to get. Still, somehow, she finds herself getting two, helping with Jessie who is a n old lady in need of a carer for the nights and then becoming the secretary of private investigator Tom Phelan. Delpha is eager to prove her skills and her worth, in spite of her prison record, and she soon finds out that life in Beaumont, Texas, has people being connected in many situations....
It shouldn't be a thing for me to be this interested in protagonists who leave jail and then have to get a whole new life. Still, it seems this is, indeed, a theme I'm interested in and I confess that when I saw the blurb for this, although the labels mention historical fiction and mystery, my first reaction was to assume that Delpha might find love too and that this story would include some romance.
Sadly for me, it wasn't exactly so and Delpha's journey is really more about her getting back her sense of freedom than anything else. The plot is also more focused on the protagonists solving the little mysteries they need to investigate and not as much on their personal lives. I get it even if it disappoints me a little, but then I've started to become a bit confused because there were plenty of tasks both Delpha and Tom had to do, and I thought this big amount of subjects seemed to be rather random.
Of course, we learn it isn't so and most of the cases they look into are somehow related, even if in a simple manner. We also get to see them deal with little things, in Tom's case, more cases and his personal relationships, and in Delpha's mostly with her other job. Somehow, even these things are connected but things got to a point where I felt lost. The biggest issue for me ended up being the writing style. It's very jarring, not always offering a linear sequence of events and sometimes I was thinking "what does this matter, why is this relevant now?" and many things were certainly too subtle for me to understand.
Thus, my issue with the writing style. This is the first book by this author that I have tried but I think the choice of writing things in the (I suppose) traditional style of the south in the early 1970s, with both expressions and references, made this a complicated task for me in terms of language. I did not understand some things nor how they would be perceived and I think my lack of knowledge was more because of the semantics and expressions than plot issues. It was sometimes frustrating how the characters would go from one scene doing something/thinking a certain idea and in the next paragraph the reference was already about something else.
Due to this, reading the book became like going through a task and it was not fun to get to know these characters as much as I imagined. All personal musings and experiences were shared in such a way that I don't feel compelled to want to know more besides what has been told in this book. I wanted Delpha to go through situations which would validate her past experiences so that she would feel her freedom as something even better than what she tells us. I wanted Tom to be more sensitive to what happened to her and for them to be more clearly a team.
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